
A few weeks ago I started a new story, Sonja Turbot: Existential Investigator. I was wondering if anyone here would be willing to provide some critiques. Here's a link:
http://ataraxiatheatre.com/2008/12/23/s ... or-page-0/
The idea for this story came to me after reading some old Mr.A comics. What if, I thought, instead of a tough uncompromising objectivist you had a tough uncompromising existentialist? How can the words "uncompromising" and "existentialist" even be combined?

